Bug#280675: ITP: l2tpns

[Frank Küster <frank@debian.org>]

Jonathan McDowell <noodles@earth.li> schrieb:

> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
>
> * Package name    : l2tpns
>   Version         : 2.0.5
>   Upstream Author : David Parrish and others <l2tpns-devel@lists.sourceforge.net>
> * URL             : http://l2tpns.sf.net/
> * License         : GPL
>   Description     : L2TP LNS which does not require l2tpd, pppd or any kernel patches.
>
>    L2TPNS is half of a complete L2TP implementation. It supports only
>    the LNS side of the connection.
[...]

To my taste, this description contains too many abbreviations, and is
only understandable for someone who already knows what they mean. Please
follow the general guidelines for descriptions,

file:///usr/share/doc/developers-reference/ch-best-pkging-practices.en.html#s-bpp-desc-basics

Thanks, Frank
-- 
Frank Küster
Inst. f. Biochemie der Univ. Zürich
Debian Developer