Bug#220257: ITP: phpldapadmin -- Web-based tool for managing all aspects of your LDAP server

[Joe Drew <hoserhead@woot.net>]

On Tue, 2003-11-11 at 14:11, David Segonds wrote:
> * Package name    : phpldapadmin
>   Description     : Web-based tool for managing all aspects of your LDAP server

Decapitalise "Web."

I don't like "all aspects" (that's for the long description) or "your"
in the short description. How about
"web-based tool for managing LDAP servers"

> phpLDAPadmin is a web-based tool for managing all aspects of your LDAP
> server. It is powerful, easy to configure, and intuitive to use. Since
> it is a web applciation, it makes your LDAP server manageable on any
> platform and from any location. phpLDAPadmin is the perfect LDAP
> administration tool for the LDAP professional and newbie alike. Its
> target audience are LDAP server administrators, but others find it
> useful as well. 

s/applciation/application/

I would like it more if the description listed just what it can
administer (or at least some examples of it.) Can it administer any LDAP
server? What about inputting data?

The last two sentences seem fairly marketspeak-ish. We don't really need
them in a Debian description.

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Joe Drew <hoserhead@woot.net> <drew@debian.org>

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