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Bug#136726: ITP: vegastrike -- Interactive Flight Simulator/Real Time Strategy



On Mon, Mar 04, 2002 at 02:42:23AM -0500, Colin Walters <walters@verbum.org> was heard to say:
> >   Description     : Vega Strike is an Interactive Flight Simulator/Real Time Stratagy being developed for Linux and Windows in 3d OpenGL... With stunning Graphics better than that of most if not all commercial space simulators, Vega Strike will be a hit for all gamers!!!
> 
> This is a bad description.  The first line of the description should be
> a full sentence which concisely summarizes the package, and it should
> not end in a period.  The rest of the description could contain fewer
> excalamation points, and need not mention Linux or Windows (since a
> Debian user already knows it's available for them). How about this:

  By way of explanation, I think that he cut&paste the description from
http://sourceforge.net/projects/vegastrike.

  Daniel

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