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Re: REPOST, SIGNED: Re: Amendment to RMS/FSF GR: Option 5



On Sun, Apr 04, 2021 at 09:14:31AM +1000, Craig Sanders wrote:
> On Sat, Apr 03, 2021 at 05:43:38PM +0200, Pierre-Elliott Bécue wrote:
> > Move choice 7 to 8 and put it seven.
> >
> > [ ] Choice 7: Rejecting and denouncing a witch-hunt against RMS.
> >
> > (maybe Craig has a better idea)
> 
> Thanks, looks good....except for two problems:
> 
> 1. you've used the wrong article "a" instead of "the".  It's gramatically
> incorrect, this isn't one of multiple witch-hunts, there's only one, singular.
> So "the" is the correct article.
> 
> 2. the witch-hunt is against the FSF board as well as RMS - that's kind of
> what makes it a witch-hunt, rather than just persecution of an individual.
> 
> [ ] Choice 7: Rejecting and denouncing the witch-hunt against RMS & the FSF.

I think I just changed all places from:
Denounce a witch-hunt against RMS and the FSF
to:
Denounce the witch-hunt against RMS and the FSF


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Kurt


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