On Wed, Sep 15, 2010 at 12:20:54PM +0900, Stefano Zacchiroli wrote: > On Tue, Sep 14, 2010 at 04:04:24PM +0100, Philip Hands wrote: > > > * Active contributors of non-packaging work, which share Debian values > > > and are ready to uphold Debian Foundation Documents, deserve the > > > opportunity for becoming Debian project members. > > ^^^^^^^^^^^^ > > to become > > or if you prefer: > > of becoming > > I bow to the superior knowledge of the British language :-) (and I > encourage anyone to point out similar fixes). > > I hereby accept this as an editorial change that does not affect the > meaning of the proposal. > > GR text is now also available at http://git.debian.org/?p=dpl/dpl.git In a similar vein, I propose a few changes (which add cosmetic fixes, and to my best knowledge, do not alter the meaning in any way). I attach my patch inline, as well as separately, to be sure at least one of them works! Thanks. Kumar From c6397c766cd298d7cd361910d35ece7046e5bb1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kumar Appaiah <a.kumar@alumni.iitm.ac.in> Date: Tue, 14 Sep 2010 22:27:17 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Add punctuation and fix some pronouns. --- gr/debian-contributors.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/gr/debian-contributors.txt b/gr/debian-contributors.txt index 11e9192..0bb4e73 100644 --- a/gr/debian-contributors.txt +++ b/gr/debian-contributors.txt @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ The Debian project aims at producing the best free operating system. -To that end the project benefits from various types of contributions, -including but not limited to: package maintenance, translations, +To that end, the project benefits from various types of contributions, +including, but not limited to: package maintenance, translations, infrastructure and website maintenance, porting, bug triaging and fixing, management activities, communication, testing, legal advice, quality assurance, etc. @@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ The Debian project acknowledges that: * To pursue Debian goals, package maintenance as well as a wide range of other technical and non-technical contributions are all valuable. -* Active contributors of non-packaging work, which share Debian values +* Active contributors of non-packaging work, who share Debian values and are ready to uphold Debian Foundation Documents, deserve the opportunity to become Debian project members. -The Debian project therefore invites the Debian Account Managers to: +The Debian project, therefore, invites the Debian Account Managers to: * Endorse the idea that contributors of non-packaging work might become Debian Developers without upload rights to the Debian archive. These -- 1.7.1
From c6397c766cd298d7cd361910d35ece7046e5bb1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kumar Appaiah <a.kumar@alumni.iitm.ac.in> Date: Tue, 14 Sep 2010 22:27:17 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Add punctuation and fix some pronouns. --- gr/debian-contributors.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/gr/debian-contributors.txt b/gr/debian-contributors.txt index 11e9192..0bb4e73 100644 --- a/gr/debian-contributors.txt +++ b/gr/debian-contributors.txt @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ The Debian project aims at producing the best free operating system. -To that end the project benefits from various types of contributions, -including but not limited to: package maintenance, translations, +To that end, the project benefits from various types of contributions, +including, but not limited to: package maintenance, translations, infrastructure and website maintenance, porting, bug triaging and fixing, management activities, communication, testing, legal advice, quality assurance, etc. @@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ The Debian project acknowledges that: * To pursue Debian goals, package maintenance as well as a wide range of other technical and non-technical contributions are all valuable. -* Active contributors of non-packaging work, which share Debian values +* Active contributors of non-packaging work, who share Debian values and are ready to uphold Debian Foundation Documents, deserve the opportunity to become Debian project members. -The Debian project therefore invites the Debian Account Managers to: +The Debian project, therefore, invites the Debian Account Managers to: * Endorse the idea that contributors of non-packaging work might become Debian Developers without upload rights to the Debian archive. These -- 1.7.1
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