Re: RFS: xiterm+thai (updated)

[Neutron Soutmun <neo.neutron@gmail.com>]

On Wed, Jan 11, 2012 at 2:05 AM, Theppitak Karoonboonyanan
<thep@linux.thai.net> wrote:
> On Tue, Jan 10, 2012 at 2:59 PM, Neutron Soutmun <neo.neutron@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Please review again
>> dget -x http://mentors.debian.net/debian/pool/main/x/xiterm+thai/xiterm+thai_1.10-2.dsc
>
> More on txiterm.1:
>
> - It should be better to wrap the file at 80 columns.

Wrapped.

> - Using .br to break lines manually in paragraphs is bad typography.
>  Note that you can also use .PP if you mean to break it into new
>  paragraph.

Recorded.

> - Wording could be improved. (See attached patch for example.)

The example patch is applied.

> - Please update the date in the .TH line every time you revise the
>  man page. And it should be in YYYY-MM-DD format. (See "man
>  man-pages" for more info.)

Updated and corrected the formatting.

> - You may also remove comment lines in the man page as
>  Paul previously suggested.

Removed.

Please review again

dget -x http://mentors.debian.net/debian/pool/main/x/xiterm+thai/xiterm+thai_1.10-2.dsc

Thanks in advance.

Best regards,
Neutron Soutmun