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Re: [RFR] templates://sinfo/{sinfo.templates}



Hi, 

Thanks for the comments.

On Thursday 15 October 2009, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Jonathan Wiltshire wrote:
> > On Wed, Oct 14, 2009 at 09:56:56PM +0300, Esko Arajärvi wrote:
> >> +_Description: Enable the sinfo CGI interface?

> >    _Description: Enable the sinfo CGI script?

I used the script here as suggested by Jonathan.

> >     The sinfo package includes a CGI for your web server. It is

> server, not "yours".  Tricky.  Well, you could go the other way and
> say:

>       A CGI script is included, to provide a web interface for sinfo. It is

This is IMO better than the original even with the enhancements.

> >     disabled by default as it might publish information about the

I also added the forgotten "about".

So now the template now reads:

Template: sinfo/cgi
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Enable the sinfo CGI script?
 A CGI script is included, to provide a web interface for sinfo. It is
 disabled by default as it might publish information about the computer not
 intended to be public.

For the control file I suggest we use the rewrite by Justin, because it is 
concise and avoid the problems with personification and repeated "information 
about".

Description: tool for monitoring computer clusters using broadcasts
 The sinfo cluster monitoring system uses network broadcasts to distribute
 information about the status of local nodes, including their CPU/memory
 usage, network load, and top five processes. It consists of a daemon
 running on each node and an ncurses frontend to monitor them.

Edu

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