Re: Review for package description

[Mauro Lizaur <mauro@cacavoladora.org>]

On Wed, 29 Jul 2009, Justin B Rye wrote:

> Mauro Lizaur wrote:
> > Package: python-iso8583
> > Description: ISO8583 Python library
> >  This library provides a pure Python interface to work with 
> >  the ISO8583, the Standard for Financial Transaction Card Originated 
> >  Messages - Interchange message specifications.
> >  The vast majority of transactions made at Automated Teller
> >  Machines and the MasterCard and Visa networks use ISO 8583
> >  at some point.
> 
> Mainly I'd take "Python" out of the short description (it's already
> in the package name, the debtags, and the archive section!) and
> replace it with a clue to what ISO 8583 is.  Also, make the title of
> the ISO standard more clearly a quote.  I'd suggest: 

Yeah, you're right. It was kinda obvious.

> 
>   Description: library for ISO 8583 transactions
>    This library provides a pure Python interface for electronic
>    transactions using ISO 8583 ("Standard for Financial Transaction
>    Card Originated Messages - Interchange message specifications").
>    The vast majority of transactions made at Automated Teller
>    Machines and the MasterCard and Visa networks use ISO 8583
>    at some point.
> 

That's much better than the one I wrote, thanks!

Regards,
Mauro

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