Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the sdic source package.
This review will last from Wednesday, April 29, 2009 to Saturday, May 09, 2009.
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Rationale:
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-edict.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-edict.templates 2009-04-25 11:10:07.872035072 +0200
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use the edict version of the English-Japanese dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-gene95 version of
- the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-gene95 version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
.
However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the edict version.
Avoid incorrect construction "recommended decline"...
@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Split in two paragraphs for better readability and to factorize
paragraphs for translators
Template: sdic-edict/jp_array
@@ -21,5 +23,7 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Ditto.
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.118684419 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates 2009-04-25 11:08:50.172035007 +0200
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
_Description: EIJIRO media/file location:
Please enter the directory containing the EIJIRO dictionary files.
.
- If you mounted EIJIRO CD-ROM at /media/cdrom, keep default.
+ The default setting is well suited if the EIJIRO CD-Rom is mounted on
+ /media/cdrom.
Improve English
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-gene95.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.153273806 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-gene95.templates 2009-04-25 11:07:57.864035445 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
Template: sdic-gene95/tmpdir
Type: string
Default: /tmp
-_Description: gene95 archive file location:
- Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file (which must
- be owned by root).
+_Description: Directory for the gene95 archive file:
+ Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file. This
+ directory must be owned by root.
Avoid leading lowercase. Split in short sentences.
Template: sdic-gene95/make_jp
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use the gene95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-edict version of
- the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-edict version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
.
However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the gene95 version.
Improved English
@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Same than abive.
Template: sdic-gene95/jp_array
@@ -28,5 +30,7 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
And again....
--- sdic.old/debian/control 2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/control 2009-04-25 11:12:41.860035503 +0200
@@ -18,30 +18,29 @@
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, wget, nkf, netcat-traditional | netcat
Recommends: sdic, sufary
Suggests: bzip2, kakasi
-Description: Installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
+Description: installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
Avoid leading capital.
This package installs the GENE95 English-Japanese
dictionary to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a Japanese-English
dictionary derived the GENE95 English-Japanese dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the Japanese-English dictionary
+ it is recommended to use the Japanese-English dictionary
installed through sdic-edict.
Avoid first person use.
.
- Before installing this package, you have to get gene95.lzh
- or gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2. You can get these
- files from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>
+ Before installing this package, you have to download gene95.lzh,
+ gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2 from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>.
use "download" instead of very imprecise "get". Use only one sentence.
Package: sdic-edict
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, edict
Recommends: sdic, sufary
-Description: EDICT dictionaries for sdic (installer)
+Description: installer for EDICT dictionaries for sdic
Standardize on one style
This package installs the EDICT Japanese-English
dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a English-Japanese
dictionary derived the EDICT Japanese-English dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the English-Japanese dictionary
+ it is recommanded to use the English-Japanese dictionary
installed through sdic-gene95.
Same than above.
Package: sdic-eijiro
@@ -52,10 +51,10 @@
This package installs the EIJIRO Japanese-English and
English-Japanese dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
- EIJIRO is available from EDP (lectronic Dictionary Project) and
+ EIJIRO is available from EDP (Electronic Dictionary Project) and
Typo
ALC Corporation. You can get the information about it from
http://www.alc.co.jp/alcshop/eng/eijiro/
.
- How to get EIJIRO dictionary data?
- - Buy EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382)
- - Download from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key
+ EIJIRO dictionary data may be obtained by:
+ * buying the EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382);
+ * downloading from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key.
Avoid interrogative form.
Use "standard" bulletting.
Make punctuation consistent.
--
Template: sdic-edict/make_en Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use the edict version of the English-Japanese dictionary? Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-gene95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged. . However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the edict version. Template: sdic-edict/en_array Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary? If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for the English-Japanese dictionary. . This will greatly improve the word searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb. Template: sdic-edict/jp_array Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary? If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for the Japanese-English dictionary. . This will greatly improve the word searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Template: sdic-eijiro/tmpdir Type: string Default: /media/cdrom/eijiro _Description: EIJIRO media/file location: Please enter the directory containing the EIJIRO dictionary files. . The default setting is well suited if the EIJIRO CD-Rom is mounted on /media/cdrom.
Template: sdic-gene95/tmpdir Type: string Default: /tmp _Description: Directory for the gene95 archive file: Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file. This directory must be owned by root. Template: sdic-gene95/make_jp Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use the gene95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary? Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-edict version of the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged. . However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the gene95 version. Template: sdic-gene95/en_array Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary? If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for the English-Japanese dictionary. . This will greatly improve the word searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb. Template: sdic-gene95/jp_array Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary? If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for the Japanese-English dictionary. . This will greatly improve the word searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-edict.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-edict.templates 2009-04-25 11:10:07.872035072 +0200
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use the edict version of the English-Japanese dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-gene95 version of
- the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-gene95 version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
.
However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the edict version.
@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Template: sdic-edict/jp_array
@@ -21,5 +23,7 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.118684419 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates 2009-04-25 11:08:50.172035007 +0200
@@ -4,5 +4,6 @@
_Description: EIJIRO media/file location:
Please enter the directory containing the EIJIRO dictionary files.
.
- If you mounted EIJIRO CD-ROM at /media/cdrom, keep default.
+ The default setting is well suited if the EIJIRO CD-Rom is mounted on
+ /media/cdrom.
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-gene95.templates 2009-04-20 15:36:50.153273806 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-gene95.templates 2009-04-25 11:07:57.864035445 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
Template: sdic-gene95/tmpdir
Type: string
Default: /tmp
-_Description: gene95 archive file location:
- Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file (which must
- be owned by root).
+_Description: Directory for the gene95 archive file:
+ Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file. This
+ directory must be owned by root.
Template: sdic-gene95/make_jp
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use the gene95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-edict version of
- the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-edict version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
.
However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the gene95 version.
@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
Template: sdic-gene95/jp_array
@@ -28,5 +30,7 @@
Default: true
_Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
--- sdic.old/debian/control 2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/control 2009-04-25 11:12:41.860035503 +0200
@@ -18,30 +18,29 @@
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, wget, nkf, netcat-traditional | netcat
Recommends: sdic, sufary
Suggests: bzip2, kakasi
-Description: Installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
+Description: installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
This package installs the GENE95 English-Japanese
dictionary to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a Japanese-English
dictionary derived the GENE95 English-Japanese dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the Japanese-English dictionary
+ it is recommended to use the Japanese-English dictionary
installed through sdic-edict.
.
- Before installing this package, you have to get gene95.lzh
- or gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2. You can get these
- files from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>
+ Before installing this package, you have to download gene95.lzh,
+ gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2 from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>.
Package: sdic-edict
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, edict
Recommends: sdic, sufary
-Description: EDICT dictionaries for sdic (installer)
+Description: installer for EDICT dictionaries for sdic
This package installs the EDICT Japanese-English
dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a English-Japanese
dictionary derived the EDICT Japanese-English dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the English-Japanese dictionary
+ it is recommanded to use the English-Japanese dictionary
installed through sdic-gene95.
Package: sdic-eijiro
@@ -52,10 +51,10 @@
This package installs the EIJIRO Japanese-English and
English-Japanese dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
- EIJIRO is available from EDP (lectronic Dictionary Project) and
+ EIJIRO is available from EDP (Electronic Dictionary Project) and
ALC Corporation. You can get the information about it from
http://www.alc.co.jp/alcshop/eng/eijiro/
.
- How to get EIJIRO dictionary data?
- - Buy EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382)
- - Download from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key
+ EIJIRO dictionary data may be obtained by:
+ * buying the EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382);
+ * downloading from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key.
Source: sdic
Section: contrib/text
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Taku YASUI <tach@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5.0.0), emacs | emacsen, po-debconf, cdbs
Standards-Version: 3.8.1
Package: sdic
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, emacs | emacsen
Suggests: sdic-gene95, sdic-edict, sdic-eijiro, bsdmainutils
Description: Emacs-Lisp program to view dictionaries
Sdic is an emacs interface to English-Japanese dictionaries
and Japanese-English dictionaries.
Package: sdic-gene95
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, wget, nkf, netcat-traditional | netcat
Recommends: sdic, sufary
Suggests: bzip2, kakasi
Description: installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
This package installs the GENE95 English-Japanese
dictionary to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a Japanese-English
dictionary derived the GENE95 English-Japanese dictionary,
it is recommended to use the Japanese-English dictionary
installed through sdic-edict.
.
Before installing this package, you have to download gene95.lzh,
gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2 from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>.
Package: sdic-edict
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, edict
Recommends: sdic, sufary
Description: installer for EDICT dictionaries for sdic
This package installs the EDICT Japanese-English
dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
Although this package can install a English-Japanese
dictionary derived the EDICT Japanese-English dictionary,
it is recommanded to use the English-Japanese dictionary
installed through sdic-gene95.
Package: sdic-eijiro
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, nkf
Recommends: sdic, sufary
Description: Installer for EIJIRO dictionaries for sdic
This package installs the EIJIRO Japanese-English and
English-Japanese dictionaries to use with sdic.
.
EIJIRO is available from EDP (Electronic Dictionary Project) and
ALC Corporation. You can get the information about it from
http://www.alc.co.jp/alcshop/eng/eijiro/
.
EIJIRO dictionary data may be obtained by:
* buying the EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382);
* downloading from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key.
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