Re: [RFR] templates://nas/{nas.templates}

[MJ Ray <mjr@phonecoop.coop>]

Rationale: try to simplify the first paragraph and remove an ambiguous
"it"; use "device" as the noun of "audio device" in the second
paragraph and remove a "however"; make third paragraph more direct.

--- nas.templates	2007-09-03 09:25:16.000000000 +0100
+++ nas.templates.mod	2007-09-03 09:29:10.000000000 +0100
@@ -2,16 +2,16 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Should nasd release /dev/dsp?
- The NAS server will by default open the audio device configured on the
- system at startup, and then keep it open until it is stopped. This will
- stop any audio clients that are not NAS-aware from using the audio device.
+ By default, the NAS server will open the configured audio device
+ at startup, and then keep it open until the server is stopped. This will
+ stop any non-NAS-aware audio clients from using the audio device.
  .
  The daemon can be configured to release the audio device when it is
- not actively using it, however with some delay after the
- application completes and the audio is available.
+ not using it, with some delay after the
+ application completes and the device is available.
  .
- An alternative is using the "audiooss" package to wrap any programs
- that use /dev/dsp directly to use the equivalent NAS calls.
+ An alternative is to use the "audiooss" package to wrap any programs
+ that use /dev/dsp to make them use equivalent NAS calls.
 
 Template: nas/mixer
 Type: boolean
-- 
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