Re: I got a bug report -- td2planet #428061
Yukiharu Yabuki wrote:
[extra context:]
> Enrico Zini wrote:
>> From the description it looks like td2planet is a reimplementation of
>> Ruby, instead of a planet implemented in ruby.
He's right; you can say "an implementation in Ruby" or "a Ruby
implementation", but "an implementation of Ruby" means something
else.
> please give me and upstream your advice.
>
> Enrico propse us these sentences :
I'll give it a full review while it's here.
>> Description: A planet implementation in ruby, mainly for tDiary
Capitalise software projects (etc.) in the style used by upstream;
don't capitalise short descriptions as sentences.
Description: a Planet implementation in Ruby, mainly for tDiary
>> This package is a planet implementation written in ruby.
Likewise:
This package is a Planet implementation written in Ruby.
But the "planet" in the next sentence refers to a particular
instance of a Planet-style RSS aggregator, and it seems plausible
that these are lowercase (like their URLs).
>> If you would like to make a planet for tDiary bloggers, this package is
>> good for you (You should read README).
"Good for you" could be improved, and so could the punctuation:
If you would like to make a planet for tDiary bloggers, this package is
what you need. See /usr/share/doc/td2planet/README.
>> Homepage: http://rubyforge.org/projects/td2planet/
This pseudoheader is conventionally formatted with one extra leading
space:
Homepage: http://rubyforge.org/projects/td2planet/
(See Policy 5.6.13 on the effects.)
--
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- control.old 2007-06-08 17:41:47.000000000 +0100
+++ control 2007-06-08 17:44:51.000000000 +0100
@@ -10,10 +10,11 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ruby1.8
Recommends: tdiary-theme
-Description: This is a planet implementation of ruby, mainly for tDiary
- This package is a planet another implementation of ruby.
- If you would like to make planet for tDiary blogers, This package is
- good for you. (You should read README)
+Description: a Planet implementation in Ruby, mainly for tDiary
+ This package is a Planet implementation written in Ruby.
.
- upstream: http://rubyforge.org/projects/td2planet/
+ If you would like to make a planet for tDiary blogers, this package is
+ what you need. See /usr/share/doc/td2planet/README.
+ .
+ Homepage: http://rubyforge.org/projects/td2planet/
Source: td2planet
Section: web
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Yukiharu YABUKI <yabuki@netfort.gr.jp>
Build-Depends: cdbs, debhelper (>= 5)
Build-Depends-Indep: ruby-pkg-tools (>= 0.11), ruby1.8
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
Package: td2planet
Architecture: all
Depends: ruby1.8
Recommends: tdiary-theme
Description: a Planet implementation in Ruby, mainly for tDiary
This package is a Planet implementation written in Ruby.
.
If you would like to make a planet for tDiary blogers, this package is
what you need. See /usr/share/doc/td2planet/README.
.
Homepage: http://rubyforge.org/projects/td2planet/
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