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xavier@caroxav.be (Xavier Luthi)
> As english isn't my mother tongue, I'm kindly asking some english native sp=
> eakers hanging around here to review my debconf template file attached to t=
> his mail.

It was mostly fine.  Here are my suggested changes:

--- templates.orig	2006-07-03 19:21:42.000000000 +0100
+++ templates	2006-07-03 19:33:26.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,58 +1,58 @@
 Template: b2evolution/db_ask
 Type: boolean
 _Description: Create the database automatically?
- b2evolution needs a database to be configured and correctly initialized.
+ b2evolution needs a database to be configured and initialized correctly.
  .
  This operation can be performed automatically for a MySQL database, if your MySQL server is currently running. You will only be prompted for the database name.
  .
  Automatically creating the database does not make sense if a b2evolution
- database already exists or if no database server has been setup when
- b2evolution is installed.
+ database already exists, or if no database server was configured when
+ b2evolution was installed.
 
 Template: b2evolution/db_name
 Type: string
 Default: b2evolution
 _Description: b2evolution database name:
- All the tables relative to b2evolution will be installed in a new database. Please enter a name that does not correspond to an already existing database.
+ All the tables used by b2evolution will be installed in a new database. Please enter a name that does not correspond to an existing database.
 
 Template: b2evolution/host
 Type: string
 Default: http://www.example.com/b2evolution
-_Description: URL to reach your blogs:
+_Description: URL of your blogs:
  Note that if you want to test b2evolution locally, do not enter the machine hostname but use 'http://localhost' instead.
 
 Template: b2evolution/db_manual
 Type: note
-_Description: Database related configuration
- Before using your blog you will have to modify the b2evolution configuration file manually.
+_Description: Database-related configuration
+ Before using your blog, you must modify the b2evolution configuration file manually.
  .
- You will need to edit /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and modify the database related variables with the appropriate values.
+ You need to edit /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and set the database-related variables to the appropriate values.
 
 Template: b2evolution/apache
 Type: note
 _Description: Web server configuration
- You may need to configure your web server before using b2evolution, in order to create an alias or setup a particular virtual host.
+ You may need to configure your web server before using b2evolution, in order to create an alias or configure a particular virtual host.
  .
- You have to do this manually, but a configuration file example can be found under /usr/share/doc/b2evolution/extras/b2evolution.conf.
+ You must do this manually, but an example configuration file can be found at /usr/share/doc/b2evolution/extras/b2evolution.conf
 
 Template: b2evolution/install_auto
 Type: note
 _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
- The database may now need to be initialized or upgraded. To do so, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
+ The database may need to be initialized or upgraded now. To do so, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
 
 Template: b2evolution/install_manual
 Type: note
 _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
  Before you can use your blog, the database may need to be initialized or upgraded.
- After the modification of /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and the configuration of the web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
+ After editing /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and configuring the web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
 
 Template: b2evolution/install_semi_manual
 Type: note
 _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
  Before you can use your blog, the database may need to be initialized or upgraded.
- After the configuration of your web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
+ After configuring your web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
 
 Template: b2evolution/db_remove
 Type: boolean
 _Description: Purge the b2evolution database?
- If you don't need the b2evolution database (${b2evo_db_name}) any longer, it could be purged automatically. The database user and the tables used by b2evolution would be removed.
+ If you don't need the b2evolution database (${b2evo_db_name}) any longer, it could be purged automatically. The database user and tables used by b2evolution would be removed.


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