Quoting Daniel Echeverry (epsilon77@gmail.com):
> Hi folks
>
> I am maintainer of tintii package, actually, I am working in a new
> version of tinti, however my sponsor suggest update description of
> package, for this reason, I want to know if could you help me with
> tintii's description because I am not a native english speaker :(
The debian-l10n-english mailing list is more suitable for this
purpose, indeed.
>
> The original description is:
>
> Description: Turns colour photos into b/w and highlights regions in colour
> tintii takes full colour photos and processes them into black and white with
> some select regions highlighted in colour. The technique is known as colour
> popping or selective colouring – tintii makes it easy.
>
>
> Checking documentation and basing my poor English thought in something
> like this:
>
> Description: Photo filter for saturation control, especially selective
> colour effects.
> Tool for selective colour, saturation and hue shift photo adjustments.
> Rather than fixing the set of colours that you can adjust, or requiring
> you to manually select them, Tintii is uniquely able to automatically detect
> the major colours in a photo, making adjustments quick, easy and more precise
> than other means.
There are a few things to (imho) fix:
- leading capital in the synopsis (discouraged)
- too long synopsis
- make sentences
- avoid adressing users ("you")
- use of en_US
- double spaces after sentence dots
- slightly lower the "advertisment style" of the second sentence and
avoid comparing with other tools
Here is what I come with as of now (dunno what "hue" is...a typo?)
Description: photo filter for saturation control and color effects
This package provides a tool for selective color, saturation and hue
shift photo adjustments.
.
One of the unique feature of Tintii is being able to automatically
detect the major colors in a photo, making adjustments quicker and
easier than manual adjustments.
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