Re: [RFR] wml://News/2012/20120311.wml Debian Edu Squeeze announcement frozen. Please review and translate
Hi,
David Prévot <taffit@debian.org> wrote:
> Debian Edu Squeeze Release should be published tomorrow as planed, and
> we would appreciate reviews and translations.
I have attached a patch.
Additionally to that, there are two paragraphs, containing information,
where Skolelinux is mostly used. But these two information are not
consistent:
part 1 says: Germany and Norway
part 2 says: Norway, Spain, Germany and France
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Skolelinux is used by at least two hundred schools all over the world,
mostly in Germany (in 2009 the region of Rhineland-Palatinate decided to
use it in all its schools) and Norway.
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Today the system is in use in several countries around the world, with
most installations in Norway, Spain, Germany and France.
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Holger
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--- debian-edu.orig 2012-03-10 21:34:40.493595169 +0100
+++ debian-edu.workingcopy 2012-03-10 21:38:41.037595179 +0100
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
Several educational applications like Celestia, Dr. Geo, GCompris,
GeoGebra, Kalzium, KGeography and Solfege are included in
the default desktop setup.
-<br />
+</p>
## what is new in this release? just the most important things, for the
## rest let's link release notes!
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
updated artwork and new Debian Edu / Skolelinux logo; a new LXDE desktop option,
in addition to KDE (default) and GNOME (LXDE and GNOME are available only
with the CD installation method); faster LTSP client boot;
-improved handing of removable media on thin clients; a new roaming workstation
-profile for laptops; full Samba NT4 domain support for Windows XP/Vista/7; etc.
+improved handling of removable media on thin clients; a new roaming workstation
+profile for laptops; full Samba NT4 domain support for Windows XP/Vista/7 etc.
<br />
The Debian Edu Team has also worked intensively on the documentation,
improving and extending the manual which is now fully translated to
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
<a href="http://maintainer.skolelinux.org/debian-edu-doc/en/debian-edu-squeeze-manual.html#Installation";>complete
download and installation instructions</a> available, including
detailed instructions in the <a href="http://maintainer.skolelinux.org/debian-edu-doc/en/debian-edu-squeeze-manual.html#GettingStarted";><q>Getting
-Started</q> chapter of the manual</a> explaining the first steps, eg setting
+Started</q> chapter of the manual</a> explaining the first steps, e.g. setting
up a network or adding users.
<br />
Those who already are using rc1-3 can upgrade to this version using for
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