Re: DPN 04/2012 frozen. Please review and translate
On Feb 18, 2012, at 12:47, Andrei POPESCU wrote:
> On Sb, 18 feb 12, 12:16:40, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
>> we just finished the last bits of DPN for the latest issue of the Debian
>> Project News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and
> See atached:
> * a patch already commited (typos and a small rewording)
> * another patch that I'd rather have ack'd by others
> See comments below for each change:
> -The Debian project is proud to have been able to
> +The Debian Project is proud to have been able to
> AFAIK "Debian Project" is always capitalized.
> family licences (including the GPL, the Affero GPL and LGPL), showing a
> costant and significant increase from the previous releases.
> -Sullivan based his analysis on symlinks to shared licence files and on
> -regular expression matching.
> Even if the DPN audience should be quite familiar with symlinks and
> regexp's, this should probably be removed. If anyone is interested in
> the methodology they will probably want to see the talk anyway.
> Holger ended his mail with a thank to IRILL who hosted the meeting and
> -provide storage for the hardware when not in use.
> +provides storage for the hardware when not in use.
> I can't explain why, but this "sounds better" to me :)
What Holger wrote is not incorrect English grammar however.
> Kind regards,
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