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Re: DPN 2012/1 frozen. Please review and translate



Hi,

Francesca Ciceri <madamezou@debian.org> wrote:
> Hi!
> 
> We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian Project
> News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.

Some small commments.
Patch attached.


Holger

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--- dpn-2012-1.orig.po	2012-01-08 10:06:49.711303072 +0100
+++ dpn-2012-1.workingcopy.po	2012-01-08 10:16:15.854339806 +0100
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 available on the wiki, and in particular a useful <a
 href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Squeeze/GettingStarted";><q>Getting
 Started</q> chapter</a> in which you can find explanations
-of how to log in for the first time.
+on how to log in for the first time.
 Feedback and installation reports can be send to the <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/";>Debian Edu mailing list</a>.
 </p>
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
 
 	<p>Since the last issue of the Debian Project News, 
 two new issues of the <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/ThisWeekInDebian";><q>This week in
-	Debian</q> podcast</a> have been published:  with
+	Debian</q> podcast</a> have been published: with
 <a href="http://frostbitemedia.org/node/35";>Jonathan Nadeau</a>,
 about the Northeast GNU/Linux Fest; and with
 <a href="http://frostbitemedia.org/node/31";>Rapha�«l Hertzog</a>,
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-In addition the <a href="http://neuro.debian.net/";>NeuroDebian team</a> were
+In addition the <a href="http://neuro.debian.net/";>NeuroDebian team</a> was
 <a href="http://incf.org/newsroom/stories/neurodebian-the-value-of-an-integrated-tool-suite";>interviewed</a>
 by the <acronym lang="en" title="International Neuroinformatics Coordinating Facility">INCF</acronym>.
 </p>
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@
 
 <toc-add-entry name="continuedpn">Want to continue reading DPN?</toc-add-entry>
 
-<p>Please help us create this newsletter.  We still need more volunteer writers
+<p>Please help us create this newsletter. We still need more volunteer writers
 to watch the Debian community and report about what is going on. Please see the
 <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/HowToContribute";>contributing
 page</a> to find out how to help. We're looking forward to receiving your mail

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