Re: [RFR] wml://News/weekly/2011/14/index.wml Debian Project News frozen. Please review and translate
Thank you David,
here are some remarks:
DebConf will be preceded by a day when the doors are opened
to the general public, commonly called Debian Day.
"when" sounds strange here. "during which" would work for sure.
Among the consequences: [...]
and Adnan has taken a vacation to prepare himself for his next projects.
Sorry if I'm failing to get a tone, but this (listing someone taking a
vacation as an effect of DebConf 11) sounds bizarre to me.
Julien Cristau announced that in the current testing Debian distribution, the
<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2011/10/msg00000.html";>\
<tt>/usr/bin/python</tt> symlink points to Python 2.7</a>.
Although this is technically correct, this is a particular way to put
it. The phrasing is an understatement, which I find a little technical
to be conveyed by the DPN. I suggest:
As announced by Julien Cristau, the default Python version in Wheezy is
now 2.7 (rather than 2.6).
Meike Reichle officially announced the<a
href="http://wiki.debian.org/BSPMarathonWheezy";>Wheezy
Bug Squashing Party Marathon</a> open, starting<a
href="http://wiki.debian.org/BSP2011/Hildesheim";>December
2 2011 in Hildesheim</a>.
The phrasing doesn't really make sense to me. "open" seems to be lost.
Regarding the date, I suggest to add a comma between "2" and "2011", or
to simply drop the year.
[...] Kouhei Maeda,
Rodolphe Pelloux-Prayer,
and
Ahmed Toulan
into our project!
The last comma is unneeded.
Le 2011-11-04 22:46, David Prévot a écrit :
Hi,
We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian
Project News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and
translations.
Instructions can be found on http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews.
As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
http://svn.debian.org/viewsvn/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml
Regards
David
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