Re: Debian Project News 2011/11 frozen. Pleaase review and translate.
On 2011-07-22 15:55, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian Project
News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.
Instructions can be found on http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews.
As usual, the issue is available on the publicity subversion repository,
even via HTTP:
Thank you Francesca. Here are my remarks:
Moray Allan announced a <a
"announcing a call" is unusual. This should probably read "sent a call",
or maybe just "called"?
call for DebConf13 bids</a>.
and add a link to<a
Either "*the* DebConf13 page" or just "DebConf13".
I am not a native English speaker, sorry, but I'm not 100% sure that
"further" is the right word here.
There has also been
a further <q>People behind Debian</q> interview, with
Martin Michlmayr</a>, former Debian Project Leader.
These images are based on Debian 184.108.40.206 and contain kernel version 2.6.38 with firmware and
a modified DHCP client for buggy MacOS X DHCP servers.
s/MacOS X/Mac OS X/
Michael's request is also open also those who are not yet Debian Developers.
Something's wrong with that sentence...
*Cough cough* Are we sure more than a thousand packages were added in a
month? I see NEW being cleared, but nothing that big. The featured list
is a lot smaller.
1099 packages were added to the unstable Debian archive recently.
BTW, I saw that in the source, not sure what it is about:
## should be reworded (this time only)!