Re: Bug#1035616: release-notes: Duplicate paragraph
On Sat, May 06, 2023 at 07:26:14PM +0900, Hideki Yamane wrote:
> Package: release-notes
> Severity: normal
>
> Dear Maintainer,
>
> In en/issues.dbk, below paragraphs seem to be duplicated.
> Not all the same, but mostly.
>
> <section id="before-first-reboot">
> <title>Things to do post upgrade before rebooting</title>
> <!-- If there is nothing to do -->
> <para>
> When <literal>apt full-upgrade</literal> has finished, the
> <quote>formal</quote> upgrade is complete. For the upgrade to
> &releasename;, there are no special actions needed before
> performing a reboot.
> </para>
> <!-- If there is something to do -->
> <para condition="fixme">
> When <literal>apt full-upgrade</literal> has finished, the <quote>formal</quote> upgrade
> is complete, but there are some other things that should be taken care of
> <emphasis>before</emphasis> the next reboot.
> </para>
>
These paragraphs use similarity to make it very clear how necessary action differ between the two cases. I would retain them as is.
-- hendrik
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