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debian-faq: minor proposal



Hi,

while translating the debian-faq into German I found two things that should
be changed IMO:


Index: ftparchives.sgml
===================================================================
--- ftparchives.sgml	(Revision 11258)
+++ ftparchives.sgml	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
 undergone some degree of testing in <qref id="unstable">unstable</qref>.
 
 <p>They must be in sync on all architectures where they have been built and
-mustn't have dependencies that make them uninstallable; they also need have
+mustn't have dependencies that make them uninstallable; they also need to have
 fewer release-critical bugs than the versions currently in unstable.
 This way, we hope that `testing' is always close to being a release
 candidate.
Index: pkgtools.sgml
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--- pkgtools.sgml	(Revision 11258)
+++ pkgtools.sgml	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@
     system.
 
   <item><tt>apt-file search <var>foo</var></tt>
-    <p>If you install the <package>apt-file</package>, similar to the above, it
+    <p>If you install the <package>apt-file</package> package, similar to the above, it
     searches files which contain the substring or regular expression
     <tt>foo</tt> in their full path names. The
     advantage over the example above is that there is no need to retrieve the



Any objections?

Holger



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