Re: More proposed changes to debian-faq
Hi,
Beatrice Torracca <beatricet@libero.it> wrote:
> <p>Similarly, <tt>exim4</tt> and <tt>sendmail</tt> both provide the
> functionality of a mail transport agent. They are therefore said to
> -provide the virtual package, "mail transport agent".
> +provide the virtual package, "mail-transport-agent".
Shouldn't the comma after package be removed?
[...]
> -<p>More detailed information on the use of each these terms can be found
> +<p>More detailed information on the use of each one of these terms can be found
Remove the "one" in the above line?
> @@ -168,11 +168,11 @@
> engine for newsgroups.
>
> <p>For example, to find out what experiences people have had with
> - finding drivers for Promise controllers under Debian, try searching on
> + finding drivers for Promise controllers under Debian, try searching
> the phrase <tt>Promise Linux driver</tt>. This will show you all the
> - postings that contain these strings, i.e. those where people discussed
> + posts that contain these strings, i.e. those where people discussed
> these topics. If you add <tt>Debian</tt> to those search strings, you'll
> - also get the postings specifically related to Debian.
> + also get the posts specifically related to Debian.
Is that correct: postings -> posts?
Holger
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