Re: A few minor fixes for etch Release Notes (en)

[Jens Seidel <jensseidel@users.sf.net>]

Hi Luca,

On Sat, Apr 07, 2007 at 05:51:58AM +0200, Luca Brivio wrote:
> Here's a patch with some minor fixes I made while translating (attachment).

> --- release-notes.en.sgml	2007-04-07 05:40:46.000000000 +0200
> +++ release-notes.en.sgml.new	2007-04-07 05:40:34.000000000 +0200
> @@ -177,8 +177,8 @@
>  
>  <![ %arm [
>          <sect id="new-arch"><heading>What's new for &arch-title;?</heading>
> -          <p>RiscPC (RPC) support is incomplete and will be removed after etch.
> -          While a kernel for RiscPC is still provided in etch, the installer
> +          <p>RiscPC (RPC) support is incomplete and will be removed after &releasename;.
> +          While a kernel for RiscPC is still provided in &releasename;, the installer
>            doesn't support this system.</p>

There is no need to fix this, since the next release will not profit
from it because of the removal. That's why Etch can be hardcoded.

> -           generate a cryptographic key and sign their Release files, as well
> +           generate a cryptographic key and sign their <file>Release</file> files, as well

I also noticed a few missing tags ...

> -          to mount the root file system and will abort with an error <em>waiting for root file system</em>
> -          followed by <em>unable to mount /dev/hdX ..not found</em>.
> +          to mount the root file system and will abort with an error <tt>waiting for root file system</tt>
> +          followed by <tt>unable to mount /dev/hdX ..not found</tt>.

X should also embedded in <var> </var>.

There are still a few seconds until the deadline, but since this patch doesn't
contains critical issues, I suggest to fix it later :-)

Thanks,
Jens