Re: A few minor fixes for etch Release Notes (en)
On Sat, Apr 07, 2007 at 05:51:58AM +0200, Luca Brivio wrote:
> Here's a patch with some minor fixes I made while translating (attachment).
> --- release-notes.en.sgml 2007-04-07 05:40:46.000000000 +0200
> +++ release-notes.en.sgml.new 2007-04-07 05:40:34.000000000 +0200
> @@ -177,8 +177,8 @@
> <![ %arm [
> <sect id="new-arch"><heading>What's new for &arch-title;?</heading>
> - <p>RiscPC (RPC) support is incomplete and will be removed after etch.
> - While a kernel for RiscPC is still provided in etch, the installer
> + <p>RiscPC (RPC) support is incomplete and will be removed after &releasename;.
> + While a kernel for RiscPC is still provided in &releasename;, the installer
> doesn't support this system.</p>
There is no need to fix this, since the next release will not profit
from it because of the removal. That's why Etch can be hardcoded.
> - generate a cryptographic key and sign their Release files, as well
> + generate a cryptographic key and sign their <file>Release</file> files, as well
I also noticed a few missing tags ...
> - to mount the root file system and will abort with an error <em>waiting for root file system</em>
> - followed by <em>unable to mount /dev/hdX ..not found</em>.
> + to mount the root file system and will abort with an error <tt>waiting for root file system</tt>
> + followed by <tt>unable to mount /dev/hdX ..not found</tt>.
X should also embedded in <var> </var>.
There are still a few seconds until the deadline, but since this patch doesn't
contains critical issues, I suggest to fix it later :-)