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Two suggestions for release notes



Hi everyone,

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Venerable Ven"er*a*ble, a. L. venerabilis: cf. F.
   v'en'erable.
   1. Capable of being venerated; worthy of veneration or
      reverence; deserving of honor and respect; -- generally
      implying an advanced age; as, a venerable magistrate; a
      venerable parent.
      1913 Webster
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The second is incorrect spelling.

--- release-notes.en.txt.orig   2005-05-22 03:23:50.000000000 +1000
+++ release-notes.en.txt        2005-05-22 03:45:54.000000000 +1000
@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@
      packages and they will be marked as 'obsolete' in package management
      front-ends.

-     To replace the aging, much-maligned, yet still popular `dselect', many
-     apt frontends have been in development during the woody release cycle.
+     To replace the venerable, yet often difficult `dselect', many apt
+     frontends have been in development during the woody release cycle.
      Interested users should investigate the `aptitude' and `synaptic'
      packages.

@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@
      however that does not mean that the packages we provide are totally
      free of bugs.  As our service to our users we provide all the
      information on reported bugs at our own Bug Tracking System (BTS)
-     browseable at bugs.debian.org (http://bugs.debian.org/), this is
+     browsable at bugs.debian.org (http://bugs.debian.org/), this is
      consistent with Debian's open development.

      If you find a bug in the distribution or in packaged software that is
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Cheers,
Andrew "Netsnipe" Lau

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