Re: Bug#148469: ITP: nvrec -- NVrec aims to be a high quality, generic capture core
On Wed, 2002-05-29 at 06:28, Marc Leeman wrote:
> Description : NVrec aims to be a high quality, generic capture core
You shouldn't begin the short description with the name of the package.
It will already be displayed prominently by package selection interfaces
(policy, section 5.7).
Secondly, I have no clue what a "generic capture core" is. From the
long description, I'm guessing it's some sort of video capturing
library. Could you rephrase this in less technical terms?
My suggestion is:
Description: a high quality, generic video capturing library
> NVrec aims to be a high quality, generic capture core.
There's no need to repeat the synopsis line (especially verbatim) in the
long description.
> At the moment
> it supports v4l1 and v4l2 devices as video sources, and oss as an
> audio source.
So I would make this the first sentence, and rewrite it as:
NVrec supports v4l1 and v4l2 devices...
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