Re: Bug#136726: ITP: vegastrike -- Interactive Flight Simulator/Real Time Strategy
On Mon, 2002-03-04 at 01:24, Mike Furr wrote:
> Description : Vega Strike is an Interactive Flight Simulator/Real Time Stratagy being developed for Linux and Windows in 3d OpenGL... With stunning Graphics better than that of most if not all commercial space simulators, Vega Strike will be a hit for all gamers!!!
This is a bad description. The first line of the description should be
a full sentence which concisely summarizes the package, and it should
not end in a period. The rest of the description could contain fewer
excalamation points, and need not mention Linux or Windows (since a
Debian user already knows it's available for them). How about this:
Description: Interactive flight simulator and real-time strategy game
Vega Strike is an interactive 3D OpenGL based flight simulator and
real-time strategy game. Its features include stunning graphics,
over 100 star systems, sound effects, a programmable AI, and a mission
scripting system.
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[maybe other stuff here]
P.S. please wrap your lines at about 72 columns or so.
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