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Re: Bug#131202: ITP: mario.fortunes -- Fortunes files from Mario



On Thu, Jan 31, 2002 at 10:24:41AM -0200, Otavio Real Salvador wrote:
> The current is:
>  A fortune database for portuguese speakers, gathered from Mario. Is
>  the result of a long time collecting cookies to make a great
>  database. 
> 
> What you think about?

The grammar is not very good, sorry. Try this:

>  A fortune database for Portuguese speakers, gathered from Mario. It is
>  the result of a long time collecting cookies to make a great
>  database. 

The second sentence is still clusmy but I can't think of a way to
improve it. Maybe it is not necessary at all.


regards,
Hamish
-- 
Hamish Moffatt VK3SB <hamish@debian.org> <hamish@cloud.net.au>



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