Re: Bug#131202: ITP: mario.fortunes -- Fortunes files from Mario
On Thu, Jan 31, 2002 at 10:24:41AM -0200, Otavio Real Salvador wrote:
> The current is:
> A fortune database for portuguese speakers, gathered from Mario. Is
> the result of a long time collecting cookies to make a great
> database.
>
> What you think about?
The grammar is not very good, sorry. Try this:
> A fortune database for Portuguese speakers, gathered from Mario. It is
> the result of a long time collecting cookies to make a great
> database.
The second sentence is still clusmy but I can't think of a way to
improve it. Maybe it is not necessary at all.
regards,
Hamish
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Hamish Moffatt VK3SB <hamish@debian.org> <hamish@cloud.net.au>
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