Bug#727708: init system coupling etc.

[Ian Jackson <ijackson@chiark.greenend.org.uk>]

Andreas Barth writes ("Bug#727708: init system coupling etc."):
> So I propose to change the text:
> >
> >     The Technical Committee offers no advice at this time on requirements
> >     or package dependencies on specific init systems after the jessie
> >     release.  There are too many variables at this point to know what the
> >     correct course of action will be.
> 
> to
> | The Technical Committee offers no advice regarding sysvinit
> | compatibility at this time after the jessie release.  There are too
> | many variables at this point to know what the correct course of action
> | will be.
> 
> (the empty line above is there by purpose, i.e. it also merges this
> paragraph with the previous one)

I will transpose this into git.

As an observation from a native English speaker, the language is
rather odd.  It is not conventional to have two time clauses next to
each other like that.  I would suggest (but do not formally propose):

   The Technical Committee offers no advice at this time regarding
   sysvinit compatibility after the jessie release.  There are too
   many variables at this point to know what the correct course of
   action will be.

Ie, move "at this time" to after "advice".

Thanks,
Ian.