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Re: Feedback wanted on website



"Lalo Martins" <lalo@webcom.com> writes:

> The page says:
> 
> > From installation support to
> > massive rollouts, we have the
> > skills and resources to do it.
> 
> Is this right? Maybe it's because I'm not a native english-
> speaker, but sounds weird to my ears. Maybe
> 
> >..., we have the skills and resources.
> or
> >..., we have the necessary skills and resources.
> or
> >..., we have the skills and resources you need.
> or
> >..., we have the skills and resources for you.

You're right, of course - bad grammar.

I updated it with your third suggestion.

I will be doing some more stuff on the site/project very
soon (maybe tomorrow if I get the time).

Cheers,

 - Jim

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