Bug#370484: installation-guide
Package: installation-guide
Version:
Severity: minor
Tags: l10n, patch
From the random-bits.po file:
1.
po:54
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Original: ⌘0 If gpm is disabled or not installed with some reason,
make sure to set X to read directly from the mouse device such as /
dev/psaux. For details, refer to the 3-Button Mouse mini-Howto at
<filename>/usr/share/doc/HOWTO/en-txt/mini/3-Button-Mouse.gz</
filename>, <userinput>man gpm</userinput>, <filename>/usr/share/doc/
gpm/FAQ.gz</filename>, and <ulink url=\"&url-xorg;current/doc/html/
mouse.html\">README.mouse</ulink>.
- with some reason
+ for some reason
- make sure to set X to read directly from the mouse device such as
+ make sure you set X to read directly from a mouse device such as
2.
.po:93
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Original: ⌘0 The <emphasis>Desktop</emphasis> task will install both
the Gnome and KDE desktop environments.
- Gnome
+ GNOME
(they get quite snitchy about it!)
3.
po:100
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Original: ⌘0 To create file systems on your partitions. For example,
to create an ext3 file system on partition <filename>/dev/hda6</
filename> (that's our example root partition):
<informalexample><screen>\n
# mke2fs -j /dev/hda6\n
</screen></informalexample> To create an ext2 file system instead,
omit <userinput>-j</userinput>.
- To create file systems on your partitions.
+ Create file systems on your partitions.
4.
po:105
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Original: ⌘0 The tool that the Debian installer uses, which is
recognized as the official way to install a Debian base system, is
<command>debootstrap</command>. <snip>
- The tool that the Debian installer uses, which is recognized as the
official way to install a Debian base system, is
+ The tool used by the Debian installer, and recognized as the
official way to install a Debian base system, is
5.
po:106
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Original: ⌘0 Or, you can use the following procedure to install it
manually. Make a work folder for extracting the .deb into:
<informalexample><screen>\n
# mkdir work\n
# cd work\n
</screen></informalexample> The <command>debootstrap</command> binary
is located in the Debian archive (be sure to select the proper file
for your architecture). Download the <command>debootstrap</
command> .deb from the <ulink url=\"http://ftp.debian.org/debian/pool/
main/d/debootstrap/\"> pool</ulink>, copy the package to the work
folder, and extract the binary files from it. You will need to have
root privileges to install the binaries.
- Make a work folder
+ Make a <filename>work</filename> folder
6.
I'm guessing the correct formatting, but these need to be formatted
to match style elsewhere in this doc.
po:129
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Original: ⌘0 To configure your locale settings to use a language
other than English, install the locales support package and configure
it: <informalexample><screen>\n
# apt-get install locales\n
# dpkg-reconfigure locales\n
</screen></informalexample> NOTE: Apt must be configured beforehand
by creating a sources.list and running apt-get update. Before using
locales with character sets other than ASCII or latin1, please
consult the appropriate localization HOWTO.
- the locales support package
+ the <filename>locales</filename> support package
- Apt must be configured beforehand by creating a sources.list and
running apt-get update.
+ <command>apt</command> must be configured beforehand by creating a
<filename>sources.list</filename> and running <userinput>apt-get
update</userinput>.
7.
po:134
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Original: ⌘0 To make your &debian; system bootable, set up your boot
loader to load the installed kernel with your new root partition.
Note that debootstrap does not install a boot loader, though you can
use apt-get inside your Debian chroot to do so.
- debootstrap
+ <command>debootstrap</command
- apt-get
+ <userinput>apt-get</userinput>
There are quite a few formatting inconsistencies. I don't have time
to specify them all. :(
8.
po:141
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Original: ⌘0 This section explains how to install &debian; on a
computer without Ethernet card, but with just a remote gateway
computer attached via a Null-Modem cable (also called Null-Printer
cable). The gateway computer should be connected to a network that
has a Debian mirror on it (e.g. to the Internet).
- without Ethernet card, but with
+ without an Ethernet card, with
9.
po:159
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Original: ⌘0 Prompt for module parameters: Yes
I can't find this string in the D-I Level 1 file. Is it in another
level?
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