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Re: [messages][d-i][tasksel] A few rephrases would be good



> > > It seems to me that there is a final "process" missing. Is not

Ah, I missed you menbtioning the missing "process". IMHO, you're right.


> > > unclear, but I feel is more clear this way.
> > > Another alternative would be:
> > > "You may try to repeat CD-ROM detection but, even if it does succeed
> > > the second time, you may experience problems later _during_ the
> > > installation."
> > 
> > I'm not sure what you're suggesting here?
> > 
> > s/in/during?
> 
> Here there were two proposed fixes:
> "You may try to repeat CD-ROM detection but, even if it does succeed 
> the second time, you may experience problems later in the installation
> process."
> 
> or 
> 
> s/in/during/


during seemed better to me.


But both Frans and Colin had arguments against it (see your IRC
backlog), so we'll just stay as is.




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