Re: [Debconf-team] Platinum Sponsors and press release
On Wed, May 01, 2013 at 09:17:03AM -0500, Gunnar Wolf wrote:
> > "DebConf13 thanks it's two platinum sponsors: Google
> > (http://www.google.com/) and the Matanel Foundation
> > (http://www.matanel.org).
> I think the short version is better. And, as others suggested, I'd add
> "as well as our other sponsors
> (http://debconf13.debconf.org/sponsors.xhtml)"
Agreed: Grammarfied:
DebConf13 thanks its two platinum sponsors, Google (http://www.google.com/)
and the Matanel Foundation (http://www.matanel.org), as well all other
sponsors (http://debconf13.debconf.org/sponsors.xhtml).
Could we also add a "fluff" sentence to that? Such as, "Your generous
support is very appreciated." ?
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