Proofread request for security faq
Hi,
I recieved a mail related to poor German translation of security/faq.
I noticed that a few sentences were word-for-word translated and changed
this to improve the translation.
Nevertheless it may be useful to apply the following patch or at least
to rephrase the mentioned stanzas:
Index: english/security/faq.wml
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RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/security/faq.wml,v
retrieving revision 1.46
diff -u -r1.46 faq.wml
--- english/security/faq.wml 31 Jan 2005 18:51:24 -0000 1.46
+++ english/security/faq.wml 6 Mar 2005 13:00:51 -0000
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
<toc-add-entry name=policy>What is the policy for a fixed package to appear in security.debian.org?</toc-add-entry>
-<p>A: Security breakage in the stable distribution warrants a package
- on security.debian.org. Anything else does not. The size of a
+<p>A: Security breakage in the stable distribution warrants that a package
+ enters security.debian.org. Anything else does not. The size of a
breakage is not the real problem here. Usually the security team
will prepare packages together with the package maintainer.
Provided someone (trusted) tracks the problem and gets all the
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
version number. Packages currently cannot be rejected and the
<abbr title="Build Daemon">buildd</abbr> would be confused if it would be
possible. Hence, please
- use mail and help by not adding more pain to the security team.</p>
+ send a mail and help by not adding more pain to the security team.</p>
<p>The <a href="$(DOC)/developers-reference/ch-pkgs#s-bug-security">\
Developer's Reference</a> has complete instructions on what to do.</p>
Jens
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