* Debian WWW CVS <webmaster@debian.org> [2004-01-08 13:08]:
> Modified files:
> english/News/weekly/2004/01: index.wml
>
> Log message:
> Rephrased paragraph about meta-gnome2, keeping it out hinders proper GNOME,
> not the other way around.
Uhm, I am not sure if I understand your correction correctly: Can
someone please proofread if the correction is in fact correct?
#v+
<code>meta-gnome2</code> packages. He listed 13 packages that bear one or
more problems. Each of them is a reason to keep <code>meta-gnome2</code> out
-of the testing distribution, which is required for proper GNOME in sarge.
+of the testing distribution, which stops proper GNOME in sarge.
#v-
From my understanding the old version was more clear. meta-gnome2 is
required for proper GNOME in sarge.
Oh, I see your misunderstanding: You think the "which" corresponds to
the keeping out of meta-gnome2, not meta-gnome2 itself. But your change
doesn't really clear what the which corresponds to.
Can someone please suggest a rephrase to make it clear?
Alfie
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