Re: Debian WWW CVS commit by jfs: webwml/english/events material.wml
On Fri, Jan 11, 2002 at 09:44:42PM +0100, Kaare Olsen wrote:
> On Fri, 11 Jan 2002 08:10:20 -0800, Debian WWW CVS wrote:
>
> > english/events : material.wml
> > Added a pointer to the (new) Debian CD pages and artwork
> [...]
>
> I don't understand the way you changed this sentence:
>
> "If you buy blank CDs in order to do a CDROM giveaway you might want
> to spend a little more money and burn some CDs, do not forget and try
> to make them look nicer than a blank CD-ROM disk [...]"
It should say "and make some stickers for them, that way they will
look nicer than blank CD-ROM disks..."
>
> I suggest this change:
>
> "If you buy blank CDs in order to burn some CDs and do a CD-ROM
> giveaway you might want to spend a little more money to make them look
> nicer than a blank CD-ROM disk [...]"
>
This one is also fine :)
Javi
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