Bug#74652: Missing word in first paragraph of http://www.debian.org/index.de.html

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Subject: Bug#74652: Missing word in first paragraph of http://www.debian.org/index.de.html
From: Andreas Oberritter <andreas@oberritter.de>
Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2000 03:02:14 +0200
Message-id: <[🔎] 39E65F16.F226FF16@oberritter.de>
Reply-to: Andreas Oberritter <andreas@oberritter.de>, 74652@bugs.debian.org

Package: www.debian.org

This sentence does not make a sense without a verb:
"Debian den Linux Betriebssystemkern, aber die meisten grundlegenden
Systemwerkzeuge kommen vom GNU Projekt; deshalb der Name GNU/Linux."

I suggest changing it to:
"Debian verwendet den Linux Betriebssystemkern, aber die meisten
grundlegenden Systemwerkzeuge kommen vom GNU Projekt; deshalb der Name
GNU/Linux."

Best regards,
Andreas

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