Bug#555709: Typos in package description
Package: decibel
Version: 0.7.0~svn806471-1
Severity: minor
User: ubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com
Usertags: origin-ubuntu lucid
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The package description contains some typos:
Decibel is a real-time communications framework, which manages services such
as Computer Telephony Integration (CTI), Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP),
text-based chat, and instant messaging. It provides a simple D-Bus interface
for communication protocols, accounts, contacts, and desktop components.
.
This package contains programs the Decibel D-Bus service. and the Decibel
desktop components for KDE 4.
In the first paragraph there shouldn't be comma's before the words "which" and "and". The last paragraph makes no sense: the word "programs" is out of place and the full stop after "service" is not needed. The package description should probably be:
Decibel is a real-time communications framework which manages services such
as Computer Telephony Integration (CTI), Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP),
text-based chat and instant messaging. It provides a simple D-Bus interface
for communication protocols, accounts, contacts and desktop components.
.
This package contains the Decibel D-Bus service and the Decibel desktop
components for KDE 4.
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