kdenonbeta/kdedebian/livecd/docs
CVS commit by pfeifle:
- fixed some typos and bad wording, made "noapic" more clear.
M +6 -5 KDEKnoppix4CeBIT2003Inlay_en.txt 1.3
--- kdenonbeta/kdedebian/livecd/docs/KDEKnoppix4CeBIT2003Inlay_en.txt #1.2:1.3
@@ -58,5 +58,5 @@
No. Not unless you ask it to. Knoppix by itself won't write to or change
your hard drive. However, it will let you access your files (documents,
- pictures, audio files....) read-only. Tools to write to your hard disk are
+ pictures, audio files....) in read-only mode. Tools to write to your hard disk are
available. You should be familiar with Linux already to use them. If you
don't know how to use this option, you may damage your system. In any
@@ -88,6 +88,7 @@
work very well.
- If your computer is a laptop, try using the noapic option; that is,
- boot: linux noapic.
+ If your computer is a laptop, try using the "noapic" option: wait for the
+ short pause in the boot process to occur, hit "F1" when offered, wait for
+ the prompt ("boot:") to appear and type "linux noapic."
12. What does it cost? What do I have to buy?
@@ -108,5 +109,5 @@
accept improvements suggested by others, because they share the programming
code too, for all to see and review. They are convinced that this model
- leads to high quality software containing little bugs. They put their
+ leads to higher quality software containing less bugs. They put their
Source Code under one of the "Free Software Licenses" (the most notable one
being the "GPL").
@@ -125,5 +126,5 @@
skills regarding GNU/Linux.
- 17 How was this Document written?
+ 17. How was this Document written?
It was written entirely with OpenOffice.org-Writer, using this very
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