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"DebConf12 needs money": Double paragraph



Hi all,

while writing the translation of the "DebConf12 needs money" news, I noticed that 
the first paragraph about DebConf occurs twice at the end of the text (a little 
varied though, but the first and the "About DebConf" paragraph are mostly the 
same).

Since the reader has already an overview on DebConf after reading the first lines, 
how about removing the usual "About DebConf" part (and moving the web address 
mentioned in it up to the first paragraph)?

In Addition, what do you think of putting the web address in the "About DebConf" 
paragraph into <a> tags, so that the reader can simply click on it to get on 
http://debconf.org ?

Greetings
Erik

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