Re: Review neded! Debian Birthday announcement to be sent out really soon... Sorry.

["Marcelo Fiscella" <marcelo@fiscella.org>]

On Mon, 15 Aug 2011 17:59:07 -0300, Jonathan Wiltshire <jmw@debian.org>  
wrote:

> On Mon, Aug 15, 2011 at 10:25:16PM +0200, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl  
> wrote:
> > [...]
>
> Attached patch un-DEs it and generally tidies up.
> You should probably warn the folks at http://thanks.debian.net that  
> you're
> going to publicise the site, because it currently has all last year's
> material displayed (including "Even though submitting thank-you messages  
> is
> now closed [...]".
>
> (if Justin is around I'm sure he'll find bugs in my en_GB though, so take
> it with a pinch of salt)

Here are some small fixes to the patched version:

s/Beside/Besides/ (not totally sure though)
s/plattform/platform/
s/to late/too late/

> All of them help making Debian to great experience and great project!

Perhaps that could be changed to "All of them help making Debian a great  
experience and a great project!"


Best regards,
Marcelo