On Ma, 29 mar 11, 11:20:42, Obey Arthur Liu wrote: > Please find our draft at: http://titanpad.com/r8N3deRTGK > Snapshot follows. ... > === > > <h1>Debian welcomes student applications for Google Summer of Code 2011</h1> Maybe it's just me, but this sounds like applications were not welcome before :) May I suggest: <h1>Debian is now accepting applications for Google Summer of Code 2011</h1> > <p><em>Debian</em> is now welcoming students to apply for <em>Google an here "... is now inviting students to apply..." > Summer of Code 2011</em> with <em>Debian</em>. This will be the sixth > consecutive participation of <em>Debian</em> and as each year, the > developer community looks forward to introduce students to the world > of <em>Debian</em> and Free Software.</p> > > <p><em>Summer of Code</em> projects from the past years have provided > valuable contributions to <em>Debian</em>. They have been also? ^^^^^ > opportunities for students to propose innovative new ideas to > <em>Debian</em> as well as for developers to collaborate with students > on code critical to <em>Debian</em>. Many successful students have > gone on to become <em>Debian</em>project members.</p> missing space ^^^ > <p>The range of project themes proposed to students is one of the > widest among all participating organizations, encompassing subjects > such as porting the <em>Debian</em> system to new architectures, > improving tools for package management, extending the developer maybe s/developer/Debian/ since the Debian infrastructure is not only for developers/developing :) > infrastructure and better integration with other well-known open > source projects.</p> Kind regards, Andrei -- Offtopic discussions among Debian users and developers: http://lists.alioth.debian.org/mailman/listinfo/d-community-offtopic
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