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--- index.wml 2010-06-13 19:53:30.128000005 +0300
+++ index_corr.wml 2010-06-13 20:27:34.856000003 +0300
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
Debian community. Topics covered in this issue include:</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="#1">Debian Community Poll</a></li>
- <li><a href="#2">Automatic installation of hardware specific
packages</a></li>
+ <li><a href="#2">Automatic installation of hardware-specific
packages</a></li>
<li><a href="#3">Desktop artwork and themes for Debian
<q>Squeeze</q></a></li>
<li><a href="#4">Debian Installer string freeze coming up</a></li>
<li><a href="#5">Provisional list of talks for DebConf10</a></li>
@@ -96,13 +96,13 @@
<a name="2"></a>
-<h2>Automatic installation of hardware specific packages</h2>
+<h2>Automatic installation of hardware-specific packages</h2>
<p>Petter Reinholdtsen introduced a new change into the Debian installation
system allowing the installation of <a
href="http://lists.debian.org/2fly6f0ypze.fsf@login2.uio.no";>hardware
specific packages</a> at installation time (or on an already installed
-system). This is useful for certain RAID controllers, graphic adaptors and
+system). This is useful for certain RAID controllers, graphic adapters and
other hardware, and is done by mapping PCI and USB IDs to the names of
Debian
packages. Petter welcomes help maintaining this list.</p>
@@ -167,9 +167,9 @@
<p>While working on requests to add specific license texts to
<tt>/usr/share/common-licenses/</tt>, Russ Allbery wrote a script to check
-which license are used how often in the Debian archive. He also
published <a
+which licenses are used and how often in the Debian archive. He also
published <a
href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-policy/2010/06/msg00099.html";>his
-results</a>. Not surprising: the most used licenses are the different
forms and
+results</a>. Unsurprinsingly, the most used licenses are the different
forms and
versions of the GNU General Public License.</p>
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
of packaging</a> once upstream development created a release that
actually has
merit.</p>
-<p>Bastian Blank wondered, whether Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q> should be
shipped
+<p>Bastian Blank wondered whether Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q> should be
shipped
<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2010/06/msg00220.html";>Xen
3.4 or
4.0</a> and listed some pros and cons for both versions.</p>
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