Re: Please proofread next issue of the DPN
Le January 11, 2009 06:15:59 pm Alexander Reichle-Schmehl, vous avez écrit :
> Hi!
>
> After a short break for the holiday season (and a short break to recover
> from the holiday season), this years first issue of the Debian Project
> News has just been finished.
>
> If you could proofread it till tomorrow evening, I'll be very glad.
Thanks for the opportunity to review DPN. I reviewed the issue. The only thing
I'm not satisfied with is the mention of Thiemo Seufer.
IMHO, "Dedicated to Thiemo Seufer." without any explanation is a bit terse. If
we consider that the topic shouldn't be repeated due to the coverage in a
dedicated message, we could at least announce the dedication in a full
sentence. I suggest
Welcome to this year's first issue of DPN, the newsletter for the Debian
community. This issue is dedicated to Thiemo Seufer, who died on 26 December
2008 in a tragic car accident. [...]
with a link on "died".
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