[DRAFT FOR REVIEW] Government owned IT enterprise SERPRO selected Debian GNU/Linux for its servers and wish to collaborate
Hello,
I heavily modified the draft [0], turned it more like an inverted
pyramid, moved and trimmed text, less paragraphs, and invite for
reviewing and improving it at british english language.
The target audience is government agencies decision makers.
Regards.
Andre Felipe Machado
[0]
http://wiki.debian.org/Teams/Publicity/DebianTimesTeam/Drafts/SerproChoseDebianAndCollaborate
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