Re: draft of the release announcement; please review

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Subject: Re: draft of the release announcement; please review
From: Joey Hess <joeyh@debian.org>
Date: Sat, 7 Apr 2007 13:33:32 -0400
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	Upgrades to Debian GNU/Linux 4.0 from the previous release Debian
	GNU/Linux 3.1 codenamed "sarge" are automatically handled 

This seems to be missing a few commas or other punctuation.

	Upgrades to Debian GNU/Linux 4.0 from the previous release, Debian
	GNU/Linux 3.1 (codenamed "sarge"), are automatically handled 

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