On Fri, 18 Mar 2005 14:28:24 -0500 Evan Prodromou wrote:
> Hi, everyone. At long last, I've made some final revisions to the
> draft summary of the Creative Commons 2.0 licenses.
Great! :)
> The main changes
> have been:
>
> * Additional phrasing changes due to MJ Ray
> * Additional phrasing changes due to Francesco Poli
Wow! Thanks for the credit! :)
[...]
> Debian [DEBIAN]_ is an operating system consisting entirely of Free
> Software. Our definition of "Free Software" is specified in the
> Debian Free Software Guidelines [DFSG]_.
Maybe you'd better say something along the lines of:
| Our criteria for "Free Software" are specified in the Debian Free
| Software Guidelines [DFSG]_.
IMHO, with this phrasing, it would be clearer that we think the DFSG
*cannot* be seen as a definition (in the mathematical or legal
meaning of the term)...
They are just *guidelines*, as their very name should make clear.
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