Re: Übersetzung von »Debian Repository HOWTO«

[Claas Felix Beyersdorf <claas@beyersdorf-bs.de>]

So ich habe jetzt einmal den Patch
für die Englische Version ...
s/apt-get upgrade/apt-get update && apt-get upgrade/

Patch habe ich angehängt.

Und für die Deutsche Version habe ich dann noch
Copyright übersetzt bzw. abgeschrieben.
Patch ist auch angehängt.


Claas

Index: repository-howto.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/repository-howto/repository-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.12 repository-howto.xml
--- repository-howto.xml	11 Jun 2006 18:32:54 -0000	1.12
+++ repository-howto.xml	14 Jun 2006 08:47:05 -0000
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
         you can set up one.</para>
     </abstract>
   </articleinfo>
-  
+
   <section id="intro">
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
     <para>Thus, once you have set up your repository, you can list and
       install all of your packages together with the ones in Debian;
       if you update a package, it'll be upgraded when the user runs
-      <command>apt-get upgrade</command>; and every user will be able
+      <command>apt-get update &amp;&amp; apt-get upgrade</command>; and every user will be able
       to easily see a short description and other important
       information about your packages.</para>
 
@@ -174,55 +174,55 @@
       <example id="debian-repository-example">
         <title>A Standard Debian Repository</title>
 
-      <screen>(your repository root) 
-| 
+      <screen>(your repository root)
+|
 +-dists
-  | 
+  |
   |-stable
   | |-main
-  | | |-binary-alpha 
+  | | |-binary-alpha
   | | |-binary-arm
   | | |-binary-...
-  | | +-source 
+  | | +-source
   | |-contrib
-  | | |-binary-alpha 
+  | | |-binary-alpha
   | | |-binary-arm
   | | |-binary-...
-  | | +-source 
+  | | +-source
   | +-non-free
   |   |-binary-alpha
   |   |-binary-arm
   |   |-binary-...
   |   +-source
   |
-  |-testing 
+  |-testing
   | |-main
-  | | |-binary-alpha 
+  | | |-binary-alpha
   | | |-binary-arm
   | | |-binary-...
-  | | +-source 
+  | | +-source
   | |-contrib
-  | | |-binary-alpha 
+  | | |-binary-alpha
   | | |-binary-arm
   | | |-binary-...
-  | | +-source 
+  | | +-source
   | +-non-free
   |   |-binary-alpha
   |   |-binary-arm
   |   |-binary-...
   |   +-source
   |
-  +-unstable 
+  +-unstable
     |-main
-    | |-binary-alpha 
+    | |-binary-alpha
     | |-binary-arm
     | |-binary-...
-    | +-source 
+    | +-source
     |-contrib
-    | |-binary-alpha 
+    | |-binary-alpha
     | |-binary-arm
     | |-binary-...
-    | +-source 
+    | +-source
     +-non-free
       |-binary-alpha
       |-binary-arm
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@
 
       <example id="trivial-example">
         <title>A Trivial Repository with Two Subdirectories</title>
-        
+
         <screen>(your repository root)
 |
 |-binary
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@
       <para>Thus, if you have a trivial repository such as the one
           from <xref linkend="trivial-example"/>, you can create the
           two index files as follows:</para>
-      
+
       <screen>$ cd my-repository
 $ dpkg-scanpackages binary /dev/null | gzip -9c &gt; binary/Packages.gz
 $ dpkg-scansources source /dev/null | gzip -9c &gt; source/Sources.gz</screen>
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
 
     <section id="release">
       <!-- todo: Release should be between <filename> tags, but then
-      xmltex won't compile it --> 
+      xmltex won't compile it -->
       <title>Creating the Release files</title>
 
       <para>If you want to enable the users of your repository to use
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@
         <para><ulink url="http://www.apt-get.org/"/> for many examples
           of real-world repositories.</para>
       </listitem>
-        
+
       <listitem>
         <para>The <ulink
             url="http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/apt-howto/";>APT

Index: repository-howto.de.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/repository-howto/repository-howto.de.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.5 repository-howto.de.xml
--- repository-howto.de.xml	12 Jun 2006 19:22:06 -0000	1.5
+++ repository-howto.de.xml	14 Jun 2006 08:59:40 -0000
@@ -54,14 +54,14 @@
     <section id="copyright">
       <title>Copyright und Lizenz</title>
 
-      <para>This document, <emphasis>Debian Repository
-          HOWTO</emphasis>, is copyrighted (c) 2002&ndash;2003 by
-          <emphasis>Aaron Isotton</emphasis>.  Permission is granted
-          to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under the
-          terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1 or
-          any later version published by the Free Software Foundation;
-          with no Invariant Sections, with no Front-Cover Texts, and
-          with no Back-Cover Texts.</para>
+      <para>Copyright 2002&ndash;2003 <emphasis>Aaron Isotton</emphasis>
+	    Kopieren, Verbreiten und/oder Modifizieren ist unter den
+	    Bedingungen der GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1
+	    oder einer späteren Version, veröffentlicht von der Free Software
+	    Foundation, erlaubt.
+	    Es gibt keine unveränderlichen Abschnitte,
+	    keinen vorderen Umschlagtext und keinen hinteren Umschlagtext.</para>
+
     </section> <!-- copyright  -->
 
     <section id="feedback">

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