Re: Bug#217838: ITP: vpnc -- Free Cisco compatible VPN client
On Mon, 2003-10-27 at 13:20, Eduard Bloch wrote:
> Description : Free VPN client compatible with Cisco's EasyVPN
s/Free// - this is implied by its placement in Debian.
> A VPN client compatible with Cisco's EasyVPN equipment.
"vpnc is a ..." - because the long description might not have all the
context of the short description, i.e. have the package name right
there.
> Supports IPSec
> with Xauth, 3DES, MD5, PFS, SHA1 and IP tunneling.
"It supports ..."
This sentence is sort of scattered. I see encryption, authentication,
hashing and methods of establishing connections. You might want to split
each out and say a bit more about each.
> It runs entirely in userspace and uses the TUN/TAP driver for access.
s/and/but/, perhaps?
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