Section about win32-loader in d-i manual
Hello,
recently there was added a chapter to the manual about the
win32-loader. There is a paragraph which is a bit curious IMHO.
And:
At the end of that chapter is a blank line in the source.
If it is intended to create a real blank line there,
there are some paragraph tags (</para><para>) missing.
My proposal for this is attached as diff.
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Kind regards
Holger
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--- en/boot-installer/x86.xml 2008-03-04 20:35:57.000000000 +0100
+++ en/boot-installer/x86-workingcopy.xml 2008-03-05 21:18:28.000000000 +0100
@@ -202,11 +202,14 @@
</para>
<para>
-If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, when you insert it and a pre-installation program
-should be launched automatically. In case Windows doesn't start it, or you are using
+If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, a pre-installation program
+should be launched automatically when you insert the disc.
+In case Windows doesn't start it, or you are using
a USB Memory Stick medium, you can run it manually by accessing the device and
executing <command>setup.exe</command>.
+</para>
+<para>
When the program is started, it will ask a few preliminary questions and prepare the
system to start the installer.
</para>
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