Re: Some comments on partman-crypto templates
On Tue, May 02, 2006 at 09:26:02AM +0200, Geert Stappers wrote:
> On Tue, May 02, 2006 at 08:40:10AM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote:
> <snip/>
> > I commited both additionnal paragraph, including Geert's suggestion
> > change.
> > My only change has been using "the encryption security" instead of
> > "the security of the encryption" and "the encryption strength" instead
> > of "the strength of the encryption".
> > This seems better to me but I'm often wrong. maybe use "the
> > encryption's security", by the way
> My native tongh is dutch and AFAIK it is
> it effects the power of an engine
> (and not "it effects the engine power" nor "it effects the engine's power" )
> Leave the decission to a native speaker.
Er... the word is 'affects', not 'effects'.
But "it affects the power of an engine" and "it affects the engine's power"
are more or less equivalent in English.
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