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Re: [D-I Manual] new wording for boot-new/ppp.xml



On Sun, Nov 07, 2004 at 11:23:30AM +0100, Frans Pop wrote:
> On Sunday 07 November 2004 09:57, Philippe Batailler wrote:
> > There are some typos in boot-new/ppp.xml.
> > What do you think of this diff?
> 
> I like it. Applied.

The previous patch trigger me to provide attached patch.
What are the opinions about it?


Geert Stappers
Index: installer/doc/manual/en/boot-new/modules/ppp.xml
===================================================================
--- installer/doc/manual/en/boot-new/modules/ppp.xml	(revision 23656)
+++ installer/doc/manual/en/boot-new/modules/ppp.xml	(working copy)
@@ -6,7 +6,8 @@
 
 <para>
 
-If your computer is not connected to a network, you will next be asked
+If your computer is not connected to a network
+or don't have enough information on CD, you will next be asked
 whether you wish to install the rest of the system using PPP. PPP is a
 protocol used to establish dialup connections with modems. In order
 to configure your connection, you will need some information from your 
@@ -15,10 +16,14 @@
 Linux distributions. You can use that information even if they don't
 specifically target Debian since most of the configuration parameters
 (and software) is similar amongst Linux distributions.
-If you don't have a modem in your computer, you can skip this step.
 
 </para><para>
 
+If you don't use the modem <emphasis>during</emphasis> installation,
+you can skip this step.
+
+</para><para>
+
 If you do choose to configure PPP at this point, a program named
 <command>pppconfig</command> will be run.  This program helps you
 configure your PPP connection.  <emphasis>Make sure, when it asks you

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